Wednesday, August 11, 2010
Mama Kat
I've never participated in Mama Kat's Writer's Workshop but it looked like fun. I was looking @ the list of her writing prompts & realized I could use one to help flesh out Shayla (a main character I'll refer to often I think). Shayla is 15, homeschooled & doesn't feel like she fits as she sees everything in color (see last post). When her best friend, Darcy, entered public school in the 8th grade, their friendship didn't survive. Shayla can't experience normal teen activities due to her sensory overwhelm & Darcy's world no longer matches.
Following is Shayla's response to Mama Kat's prompt "I miss the friend you used to be."
Once upon a time
You were my childhood;
Splashing through iridescent sprinklers
Chasing shadows like Peter Pan
Creating lagoons out of puddles
Immersed in mermaid games as our
Laughter swirled in silver currents of air
Once upon a time
We were sisters;
Swapping secrets and clothes
Whispering ghost stories and gossip
While braiding hair and popping bubbles
Violet webs of oneness encircled us
Once upon a time
Tim Burton wrote the script;
Your button eyes averted
Onward to shopping malls and football games
Knotted thread spiked red binds the memory
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Prompts are interesting ways to fire the imagination. Your response is evocative and haunting.
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