It was a dark and stormy night
Caressing my mood as Mother Nature sings my song
Fingers of wind stroke chords
Rhythm of thunder matches rage
I scream in time
Lightening strikes in beat
Face uplifted, in harmony with rain
Only a sotto voice remains
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oh my goodness...I had chills!
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ReplyDeleteAbsolutely lovely, poetic and profound use of this prompt.
ReplyDeleteYou brilliantly removed the cliche and inserted tender emotion in its place.
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Nice work...love "fingers of wind stroke chords".
ReplyDeleteFound you on one of the Sunday Follows. I'm your newest follower on your super awesome blog! I'll be back (in my best Arnold voice). My youngest daughter is named Shayla!
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Loved the phrase "Mother Nature sings my song". Very thought provoking poem. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI loved each brilliantly and carefully chosen word. You put an emotion into this prompt I didn't expect to see.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully composed, Kaelin! I'm so impressed with what a lovely poem you crafted from the prompt. So unexpected yet so delightful! Thank you for joining in! Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteYou and MN woven as tightly together as your words....creating something beautiful with which we can all relate.
ReplyDeletewow - such beautiful words from so many talented people! thank you all for coming by!
ReplyDeleteWhat a lovely use of the prompt. You are a really creative soul.
ReplyDeleteSuch a beautiful use of the prompt. No cliches here! Lovely, I really enjoyed this.
ReplyDeleteRayna & Kat so glad you stopped by & thank you for the very kind words!
ReplyDeleteA well crafted work of art
ReplyDeleteGreat poem. I love a good, cathartic storm, too.
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This is beautiful. With Music being my second love, I really enjoyed all of your metaphors and how your words flowed like a beautiful melody.
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