Somewhere along my blog wanderings, I came across Magpie Tales, a blog that hosts writing prompts & links. This week's prompt is this picture of a popular, upscale Italian fragrance from the 1930's - if Google is correct:) Gazing at this picture brought to mind the next image (also found in my wanderings from Magic Moonlight) & together they formed:
Drops on pulse points
Hint of cathedrals and wine
A sharpened gaze under a nightsky
If I peel mosaic layers
Will you see
beyond the moonsplash on the arches and stairs
Or will you see crumbled stone
Concrete blocks of bone
Will you see lips, eyes, flesh
An artist's brush and awl
Or will you hear the aria in my spiritsong
Will my banner of shimmery stars
and lightrays fly
or will you raise your own
overshadowing all
magnificent
ReplyDeleteright down the core
Rene
lovely and lyrical - bkm
ReplyDeletelike an aria from an opera...beautifully written
ReplyDeleteThe photo you have paired with Willow's is perfection ... as is your Magpie.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done and perfectly paired!
ReplyDeleteSo much to think on in this beautiful poem...i love it! :-)
ReplyDeleteoh this was excellent...cathedrals and wine...nice and the splash later on...tight write...nice magpie!
ReplyDeleteThank you all for visiting - I have really enjoyed reading the varied flavors this prompt inspired.
ReplyDeleteDrops on pulse points
ReplyDeleteHint of cathedrals and wine
Don't they just? :)
GORGEOUS!!!! Absolutely.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully sculpted poetic scent.
ReplyDeleteNice magpie.
Lovely imagery!
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ReplyDeleteReally enjoying such kind comments!
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